pendragon1
Member Since October 26, 2010
My Cousin Dawn
by
Danny Cole
5082 days ago
pendragon1
5172 days ago
-
0
+
Coming of age isn't all angst, is it?
Mom's new life
Fine story. Best wishes for your film venture...
My Mother, A true story part one
Something is wrong with the formatting. However, that does not save the story which is full of grammatical and spelling errors...
Sex with my Mom-True story
Absolute crap, from the writing to the paragraph from hell...
Loving Sister's 1
In what language is this written?
How i got fucked by my mom and sister
Story has possibilities, but the spelling, usage, and grammar are woeful...
Two for One
Not a great story, just a collection of words; a blown opportunity...
Rebecca likes it risky
Great bedtime story...
My Cousin...
Good, well-told story...
A x-mas story
Good story; the next part will be welcome...
Visiting my cousins: part 1
What everyone else wrote: Part 2 fast...!
Cousin KJ & Me
Good, clear start to the story. Keep up the good work in the next portion/s...
The Swamp
Enjoyable story; some words that no language will ever recognize...
Dawning Love
Decent enough story; good detail...
Brother and sister's romance
Well-told story...
Auntie Ruby at last
Good story, well-told...
A Mother's Solution
A good little story; decently written...
Sisters
Nice little story, but could be so much more...
Damn Tired Part 1
Good story...
Comiing home drunk to a tiny mini
Too short; too scant as to detail; some really confusing spellings and sentance structures. In all, not great...
The Seduction of My Own Mother
This should be in the rape section...
Both Of Us Have Sex With Our 14 Year Old Son
Poor attempt...
My Auntie
Nice simple little story; spelling and grammar not great...
Sleepymom
Not a bad little story. Needs spell-check and some paragraphs, as well as grammatical help...
seducing daddy
I didn't think it possible to spell and punctuate so badly; decent enough story...
Sister part 1
Unfinished, but worth continuing...
The next day with Sarah
A decently told story...
Crystal
Somewhat careless, but a fine attempt, given its eccentricity...
Colony 01
Nice story; well told...
Christmas Eve
I wish I could have a Christmas like this one...