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pendragon1 Member Since October 26, 2010
Me and My Cousin by trey vs world 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + More detail; some proofreading and editing; good story, though...
Showing Cousin the Ropes by chuhonets 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5168 days ago
- 0 + Simple and unadorned story; decent enough...
Sisterly love by roger28752000 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5165 days ago
- 0 + Infantile...
A Daddy's Dream Pt.1 by ????? 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + You must be kidding me...
Derek and Ryan by Layla-Cullen 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + Formatting is screwed-up; unreadable...
My First, My Brother by thearchivist 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + What a gentle, sweet, loving story...?
My Angel by Nekodoshi 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5170 days ago
- 0 + What a beautifully sensitive story...?
A Days End To Remember by FoxyHoe 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5166 days ago
- 0 + Good story. Needs some work on grammar and spelling, as well as paragraphs...
Kissing Cousins by Honey Ryder 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5166 days ago
- 0 + Needs a little work. It's great to read a story from the girl/woman's perspective...
Sis & Robin by buzltyr 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5166 days ago
- 0 + Agood enough tale. Seems a bit rushed and careless...
Me and my Mom pt.1 by cOKe_HorE_69 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5167 days ago
- 0 + Rubbish...
Older Sister by petookh 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + It was hardly worth the effort...
Lisa Gets More Than She Bargained For by aprincelyfrog 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + Wonderfully well written; very erotic...
Fucking in my Family by wet panties 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5166 days ago
- 0 + Basically promising. Needs a lot of spelling and grammatical work; needs practice writing...
Surfs up at my Cousins place by Vaughan 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + A waste of your and my time...
Which Would You Choose? by lmsyd4u 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5169 days ago
- 0 + Excellent story; needs editing - nothing too drastic...
Sodomized By My Sister by TITTIEBABY 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + I liked it...
MY Sleeping Cousin by Disenchanted 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5171 days ago
- 0 + Couldn't read it because the author couldn't write it...
MY Sleeping Cousin by Disenchanted 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5171 days ago
- 0 + Couldn't read it because the author couldn't write it...
Train Ride by asiansexkitty 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5170 days ago
- 0 + This has the possibility of being a good story. However, the writing is very poor, and prevents it from being so...
my dreams about my hot older cosin by neilmehta 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + Couldn't read it; you are going to fail ESL...
great experience!!!! by target_blue 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5171 days ago
- 0 + Couldn't read it because the author couldn't write it...
My Brother Hates Me by Proximus 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + This was like a train wreck, it held a fascination...
It Begins by Raybear 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5173 days ago
- 0 + It's no use; I just couldn't read it...
Nailing my Cousin part 1 by woodgod23 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + Admit it. You are stretching my credibility, something like the way in which you stretched your paragraph...
Friday Night by JizzoB 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5180 days ago
- 0 + Just got right to the point. No introduction, no finesse...
My Sisters Christmas Present To Me by sexytime 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5171 days ago
- 0 + Coitus interruptus is such a PITA, isn't it...
Different life-Incest by asiansexkitty 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + No more...!
Kristy...again and again by appaulo 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5170 days ago
- 0 + You submitted an unfinished story. Why even bother?
16 year old has fun with mum by lachie90 5082 days ago
pendragon1 5172 days ago
- 0 + Not a great effort; English is way poor...