pendragon1
Member Since October 26, 2010
Little Sis and I
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UpperTown
5314 days ago
pendragon1
5149 days ago
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A bit rushed, and lacking in detail; readable enough, but not really worth the effort...
Making Out With Mom
I am envious...
Family fuck in the morning
Great little story; congratulations...
fucking my older sister
See above note AND add editing, with a stress on the English language to it...
LISA'S BIRTHDAY
Worthwhile story; some unnecessary typos and grammatical errors...
My little sister Jess
Good first attempt; very readable and literate; seems rushed in places...
Best Little Sister Ever - Episode: 1
Decent story; spelling and grammar needs some work...
Sister's Special Relationship
Good enough story; not enough detail and development; spelling, tense agreement, and grammar lacking...
Growing up never felt so good
Well-written, and descriptive. Not a fan of rough sex
Daddy Dearest
Good, well-written story...
What I saw Momma and Daddy Doing
Short, but effective...
Caught in a Compromising Situation
Good story; pretty unique; poor sentence structure and tense agreement all over the place...
My Daughter Cindy Part # 1
Decent story; make more paragraphs...
Daddy's Little Girl - Part 2 (Modelling For Daddy)
Keep going...
Daddy's Little Girl - Part 1 (The Dirty Panties)
Good story; well written...
Daddy's Little Girl - Part 3 (Daddy's Fuck Doll)
Good story; please watch for paragraphs...
His Twin Girls - 1
Good story; watch the tenses and grammar...
My Daughter Kelly
Enjoyable story; keep up the good work...
Late Night Surprise
Good job; it is great to read about it from the female's point-of-view...
DAUGHTER look's suspicious
Good, solid story of coming-of-age the alternative way...
Passed out sis
This story was so fast-moving that it left me breathless. Try writing normally, rather than in internet speak...