pendragon1
Member Since October 26, 2010
Friday Afternoon Delight
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Zeton
5209 days ago
pendragon1
5151 days ago
Zeton
5209 days ago
pendragon1
5151 days ago
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Good story; well-written; a bit lacking in detail and development...
My mom, My lover, My friend (part 1)
by
hotnfl4u
hotnfl4u
Decent enough story; too short, and reads too fast...
Daddy's Special Little Girl-Part 1
by
XXXAnnabellaXXX
XXXAnnabellaXXX
Great start to a story. I look forward to its completion...
Summer sleepover
by
Jungleboy
Jungleboy
Good story; A woman smells/tastes musKy, not musTy; some spelling and grammar work needed...
Crime and Punishment - Part 1 - The Crime
by
writethis69
writethis69
Good enough story; not into what seems to be the beginning of manipulation...
Me and my aunt for the first time.
by
Hitmanhh
Hitmanhh
This is a good story. However, the "wall of words" made by a single paragraph detracts from the pleasure and ease of reading...
Fuck by my Sisters Husband True Incest
by
jkwon
jkwon
Awful writing; has the possibility of being a good story, though...
Incest with my dad-True
by
jkwon
jkwon
This story is completely undeveloped and unbalanced; needs extensive editing, and that's just to start...
Boobs and Boners (Mother/Son)
by
teninchcockformom
teninchcockformom
Spelling, grammar, tense and case agreement, among other flaws; In spite of these flaws, this is a great story...
Aunt Mary
by
g_goyal2000
g_goyal2000
There is too much wrong with this story to just fix it. Slash and burn and start over...