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pendragon1 Member Since October 26, 2010
Family Values Part 1
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + Formatting problems make this very difficult to read...
Me, my Daughter and Husband
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + A few typos and some tense confusion; very readable, though...
What a sleeping GrandMother doesn't know
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + A mediochre effort at best...
Getting To Know The Neighbors
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + Well-told little story...
Daddy's Baby Doll Forever
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + Decent enough story; some problems with spelling, tense, and case...
Unexpected love
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + No news: One paragraph does not cut it. Is Teri the brother or the sister? Decent story, decently told; needs more detail...
Mitchs Adventures in Incest (LONG!)
pendragon1 5162 days ago
- 0 + This was a great read; a few of inconsistencies, and errors, but wonderfully worthwhile, nonetheless
Nosy Neighbor Part 1
pendragon1 5148 days ago
- 0 + Strange plot to this story; what happened to the video and how was it so easily replaced by the mom...?
Lisa Moves In
pendragon1 5180 days ago
- 0 + Nicely written story...
Diaries
pendragon1 5180 days ago
- 0 + The format seems fine to me. Great story...
Sweetness
pendragon1 5180 days ago
- 0 + Good, if bittersweet story...
Family Traditions Prt 1
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + The beginning to that which could be a captivating story...
MY DESTINY 1
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + A few spelling and terminology errors; story seemed rushed
1
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + What comsmith22 wrote...
I caught my mom and sister
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Oh dear! Life is too short to read stories such as this one...
Candy's Dilema
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Great story; disappointing ending, though...
Julie
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Good story, with good plotting and word pictures...
My Daughter; My Wife
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Pretty good yarn...
A fresh start for brother and sister.
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + I am looking forward to the second installment...
I'm in control
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + The spelling and such prevents this from being a better-than-good story.
Vodka is good
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Story needs to be filled-out more. Basically, it is solid.
Vijay and his Dark-Skinned Mother
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Excellent story; brilliant description; exceptional writing
40 years of wanting my cousin
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + A nicely written gentle kind of story...fitting for such a long wait.
My little angels
pendragon1 5181 days ago
- 0 + Clear, appealing, and well-written...
My Mistake (How I accidentally fucked my mother)
pendragon1 5155 days ago
- 0 + Well-written, good story...
Babysitting My 16 Year Old Sister Jesse
pendragon1 5153 days ago
- 0 + Not very credible; good story; well-written...
Overtaken with Passion and Lust
pendragon1 5148 days ago
- 0 + Good story; thank you...
teaching the kids part 1
pendragon1 5150 days ago
- 0 + Good story; fine detail...
Grandma's Rose (Part 2)
pendragon1 5143 days ago
- 0 + Basically a very solid story; thank you for the pleasure it gave. Some sentences made absolutely no sense, whatsoever...
Dick in Jane - Ch1 - The games we play
pendragon1 5155 days ago
- 0 + A most excellent story; great readability; good detail...