pendragon1
Member Since October 26, 2010
Family Values Part 1
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Wayward45
5162 days ago
pendragon1
5162 days ago
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Formatting problems make this very difficult to read...
Me, my Daughter and Husband
A few typos and some tense confusion; very readable, though...
What a sleeping GrandMother doesn't know
A mediochre effort at best...
Getting To Know The Neighbors
Well-told little story...
Daddy's Baby Doll Forever
Decent enough story; some problems with spelling, tense, and case...
Unexpected love
No news: One paragraph does not cut it. Is Teri the brother or the sister? Decent story, decently told; needs more detail...
Mitchs Adventures in Incest (LONG!)
This was a great read; a few of inconsistencies, and errors, but wonderfully worthwhile, nonetheless
Nosy Neighbor Part 1
Strange plot to this story; what happened to the video and how was it so easily replaced by the mom...?
Lisa Moves In
Nicely written story...
Diaries
The format seems fine to me. Great story...
Sweetness
Good, if bittersweet story...
Family Traditions Prt 1
The beginning to that which could be a captivating story...
MY DESTINY 1
A few spelling and terminology errors; story seemed rushed
1
What comsmith22 wrote...
I caught my mom and sister
Oh dear! Life is too short to read stories such as this one...
Candy's Dilema
Great story; disappointing ending, though...
Julie
Good story, with good plotting and word pictures...
My Daughter; My Wife
Pretty good yarn...
A fresh start for brother and sister.
I am looking forward to the second installment...
I'm in control
The spelling and such prevents this from being a better-than-good story.
Vodka is good
Story needs to be filled-out more. Basically, it is solid.
Vijay and his Dark-Skinned Mother
Excellent story; brilliant description; exceptional writing
40 years of wanting my cousin
A nicely written gentle kind of story...fitting for such a long wait.
My little angels
Clear, appealing, and well-written...
My Mistake (How I accidentally fucked my mother)
Well-written, good story...
Babysitting My 16 Year Old Sister Jesse
Not very credible; good story; well-written...
Overtaken with Passion and Lust
Good story; thank you...
teaching the kids part 1
Good story; fine detail...
Grandma's Rose (Part 2)
Basically a very solid story; thank you for the pleasure it gave. Some sentences made absolutely no sense, whatsoever...
Dick in Jane - Ch1 - The games we play
A most excellent story; great readability; good detail...