thegreenscar3
Member Since March 29, 2010
Niece-tastic - 3
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UncleT
4974 days ago
thegreenscar3
4963 days ago
UncleT
4974 days ago
thegreenscar3
4963 days ago
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Loved this one, the best of the three. It had a great story and sex scenes. Little confused cause in 2 you mentioned that Terry's eyes were hunter green and the in this one you said they were electric blue. I think you should keep the bold lettering in fits well in the story. You have to write another one, I'm dieing to know whats happens with the girls and Amanda
Niece-tastic - 2
by
UncleT
UncleT
Better sex in this one but I love the progress of the story in the first one! Great job!
Niece-tastic
by
UncleT
UncleT
I loved the story. Its one of the better one I've read. The only thing that kind of threw me off was the very last paragraph. The whole story you took your time and the last one felt rushed.
Goodnight Kiss
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thegreenscar3
thegreenscar3
Oh, sorry. Your an expert, right? All those long ass stories you wrote. What? You haven't wrote anything, Then shut up. If you can do better than lets see it. Stop complaining just to be a dill hole. I've written plenty of other stories that are longer than this one, Sorry for tying some verity.