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"Ryan, hurry up it's time to go."

Dad yells up the stairs as I pull on my socks getting ready to go on a family shopping trip. My feet barely touch the steps as a fly down the stairs and step into my shoes that I never bother untying.

The door to the garage is open and I can hear the van running. I open the sliding door and drop into the 2nd row seat and pull the door shut in one quick motion. Mom's perfume is overwhelming in the closed cabin. Dad backs out of the garage and we're soon cruising toward the mall.

The familiar drive goes quickly without any talking. As soon as dad pulls into a parking spot at Target all three of our doors open and mom and dad