lexin
Member Since November 09, 2009
Old Man's Lust For 14 Year Old Pussy
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jrenfroe
5252 days ago
lexin
5252 days ago
jrenfroe
5252 days ago
lexin
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Yeah, a great story well constructed in detail and a good creative effort that sounds real. Other then the formatting issues, I have to say congratulations. (not sure if I can offer advise on formatting) ~smiles~
Sarah and her son
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Carolina3777
Carolina3777
Well done, a lovely story. Thanks for the read and do not stop here...please
FINDING KRISSY - CHAPTER Part 3 - Everything Seems Familiar
by
lexin
lexin
"just one little criticism you had Krissy/ Annie call the male character Lex then a few times called him Max"
Yes. During there onine friendship and before they realized who was who, Max introduced himself as Lex (silly_fuddy_duddy).He was new to the net and did not use his real name intially. Annie and Lex had no Idea it was Krissy and Max chatting. The story did have some changes made by the administrators and I have discovered a line or two missing that may have helped explain this.
Hey, thanks for the feedback!!
Yes. During there onine friendship and before they realized who was who, Max introduced himself as Lex (silly_fuddy_duddy).He was new to the net and did not use his real name intially. Annie and Lex had no Idea it was Krissy and Max chatting. The story did have some changes made by the administrators and I have discovered a line or two missing that may have helped explain this.
Hey, thanks for the feedback!!