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hawk9934 Member Since October 19, 2009
My Georgia Peaches - Chapter 2
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 2 + I must agree, more detail from different perspective would be nice. but all i can say is I am glad it finally showed up.
Fleeting Moments:
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + great start, i can't wait for part two. very good details
Naughty next door - The final move?
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + You are doing great. It would be a shame to see the story end like this
A hitchhikers dream
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + can't wait for the next one.
Raven's tale
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 7 + You have a good start, but it could easily be extended.
Things That Go Bump in the Night
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + That is a good story, start to end. Is there going to be more?
The Sins of St. Sebastiens - Chapter 1
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + Is part 2 coming soon?
Visiting my cousins: part 1
hawk9934 5542 days ago
- 10 + Good start, great details. Keep it up