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drewdp Member Since October 18, 2010
the neighbors daughter
drewdp 4708 days ago
- 0 + Looking forward to a part two. There were a few spelling and grammar errors, but the story was still readable. Just Try to add some more details and re-read it at the end to catch those little mistakes. Keep writing though, I can't wait for the next segment.
Winter Wonderland
drewdp 4889 days ago
- 1 + great story, cant wait for part 2. that being said, some paragraphs would be nice.
Hymen Snap (Chapter One)
drewdp 5160 days ago
- 0 + Its a good start. Looking forward to the next piece.
FINDING KRISSY - Chapter Part 4 - Settling In
drewdp 4842 days ago
- 0 + so I just discovered this story, and it's amazing. I really hope you come back to finish it, I would love to see it continue!