jollyman
Member Since October 19, 2009
Getting her own way
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Young at Heart
5071 days ago
jollyman
5542 days ago
Young at Heart
5071 days ago
jollyman
5542 days ago
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yet another great story please add to this one to
The Wonderful Divorce (Part 2)
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Hotthoughts
Hotthoughts
good work but the colored text still makes it hard to read it blends in to white background if you use colored text use a darker color on the next part if there is a next part i hope so it is good story there was some spelling mistakes but that happens
Noc 6
by
enchrine
enchrine
yet again another masterpiece of writing ill be looking forwrad to the last cahptesr of this story keep up the good work
Home With My Little Sister 7
by
othername37@yahoo.com
othername37@yahoo.com
very good story I am looking forward to more from even some more about this brother and sister
Brother & Sister: Part 3
by
world_refugee
world_refugee
keep it comming this story is going one best sexual climaxs i have ever read on here I really like how you are doing this story it is worth the wiating to see what happens next and I hope it comes soon :)
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 & 2
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tj68
tj68
very good story looking foewrod to more of it but try and brake the chapters up like do 1,2&3 then any other gruop them is gruops of three just a suggestion but tihs is good story so keep it cummimg :)
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 & 2
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tj68
tj68
keep vaction title it will make is easier to find when you post it
Chelsea's Persuasion
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enchrine
enchrine
some very good work you have a good writing style thsi story could go farther but it good to end here and hope you keep writing
My life with uncle-pt 12
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sarahandmark
sarahandmark
This keesp getting better and when this gruop of stories keep writing. I am sure that you have many good stories to tell about the love you have with your uncle.
I am looking foreward to the next part. :-)
I am looking foreward to the next part. :-)
Summer of '04
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HornyBitch2222
HornyBitch2222
you need to cjeck your story there are problwms with text and it hard to read and back off on the cussing it trun off for me now others it might not be i would check it over and repost it if i was you I have read many a stories on this site and this mig
My life with uncle-pt 11
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sarahandmark
sarahandmark
This story keeps geting better and the love that you have for uncle shows in every one. I am looking forward to reading more and hope you continue to write. your uncle is a very special man to teach you what love is all about keep up the good work.
My Beautiful Niece
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tocs8188
tocs8188
good story but to short and not ebiough detail if you plain to sec about this make it longer with more detail
Falling For Brother-Part 3
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Naughty_Bear123
Naughty_Bear123
yes pease add more to group of stories very well written and getting better after each story
The Discovery Pt 2
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ChristyCr23
ChristyCr23
it good story but im not into bondage and it might have been better if that was left ou of it but plaese do more
Getting it Straight
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mrjjones
mrjjones
Think that this story ahs to be one of the best stories that i have readon here keep up the good work
Mommy, Sonny and a Voyeur - The Conclusion
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raye829
raye829
i may not be into M/M sex but thsi story was well wrtitten and that si good question at tthe end what doe sthe future hold for them?
Innocent Offer Becomes a Dream Come True
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littlee1952
littlee1952
please add more to this story like who the triming ans having goes and what happened after that
cousins reunited + some other family
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bulgingvenus69
bulgingvenus69
I can't give you any stars for this. There are so many spelling mistakes you can not read the story and make any since of it I suggest you take off the site edit it and fix the mistakes.
part two
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Shard
Shard
I agree with safarijim you need a lot more detail it is good story other wise if need help or have any questions Eamil me at chyck112156@yahoo.com I go bt jollyman on here
The Davis twins Chapter 1. (repost)
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publisher
publisher
thanks for feed back even after I proof read this about 15 times and I see that still made some mistakes in it. I am gald you enojoyed it I do have more stories that I am editing now and I will post them when I feel they are ready
Oh Sam Chapter 3
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all@cat
all@cat
You did it agian iy keeps getting better looking forword to more of their love and who says age matters when it comes to love I do see a deep undestanding of it in the storyies keep up the good work.
Camryn: C04
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enchrine
enchrine
keep it coming and seen one typo I will email you baout it but the story is very good