dirtytyke
Member Since May 31, 2010
Wife to a Good Slut A great Dr.
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kuntrhyme
4867 days ago
dirtytyke
4858 days ago
kuntrhyme
4867 days ago
dirtytyke
4858 days ago
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Work on your spelling and grammar and you may turn out a decent story.
Mommy wants my 14 year old cock
by
girthguy
girthguy
Nice story, but I second the comment about waist/waste. Please read your story through before you post to make sure you don't have errors like this. I noticed one or two others as well.
You may find that 14 is below the age limit allowed on this site. I don't remember what it is, so you should check and possibly edit your story if appropriate.
You may find that 14 is below the age limit allowed on this site. I don't remember what it is, so you should check and possibly edit your story if appropriate.
Home from the business trip part 3
by
Morgen
Morgen
Uh oh... this can't be good...
I don't know if I want to read what happens next?!!
I don't know if I want to read what happens next?!!
Storm Child chapter 2, Clear Skies
by
Oedipusrex73
Oedipusrex73
A nice second chapter. I'm glad you managed to get it posted again.
Strangely I managed to find a copy you'd already posted using google, however it has a different storyID and doesn't show up anywhere, not even in your submitted/published list. see http://www.sexstoriespost.com/stories/story/237143/
Strangely I managed to find a copy you'd already posted using google, however it has a different storyID and doesn't show up anywhere, not even in your submitted/published list. see http://www.sexstoriespost.com/stories/story/237143/
Storm child part 2
by
Morgen
Morgen
I second atoydons comment.
I forgot that you hadn't written the first one, they seemed to go together so well.
I forgot that you hadn't written the first one, they seemed to go together so well.
Daughter's sexy sight part 25
by
Morgen
Morgen
Lovely story :)
I was disappointed to hear the holiday is almost over, but look forward to hearing how the story proceeds.
I loved the little cum swap at the end there too. Just that extra little spice that makes the story really hot.
I was disappointed to hear the holiday is almost over, but look forward to hearing how the story proceeds.
I loved the little cum swap at the end there too. Just that extra little spice that makes the story really hot.
Curious Kayla gets to see.
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Morgen
Morgen
Another nice story Morgan.
As much as I'd like to read them getting together, I think the tension of them just fantasizing about it is great too.
Either way, if you continue the story then I look forward to reading what happens!
As much as I'd like to read them getting together, I think the tension of them just fantasizing about it is great too.
Either way, if you continue the story then I look forward to reading what happens!
Daughter's sexy sight part 23
by
Morgen
Morgen
Very nice morgen.
I loved what the girls had their dads do. That's so hot.
I loved what the girls had their dads do. That's so hot.
Daughter's sexy sight part 22
by
Morgen
Morgen
Very nice.
I like the way each story has some new sexual adventure for the four of them, rather than having them do it all in the first couple of chapters then be lost for what to do later.
The guys preparing each other for their daughters arses was a nice touch too.
I like the way each story has some new sexual adventure for the four of them, rather than having them do it all in the first couple of chapters then be lost for what to do later.
The guys preparing each other for their daughters arses was a nice touch too.
Exploring heavenly bodies part 3
by
Morgen
Morgen
Very nice!
I can't think of any thing else to say, other than I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
I hope Greg doesn't get jealous...
I can't think of any thing else to say, other than I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
I hope Greg doesn't get jealous...
Exploring heavenly bodies part 2
by
Morgen
Morgen
Great story. :-)
I've got to get some of that Eschavia for my wife not to mention Elproxsin and Chalama for me too.
Love it.
I've got to get some of that Eschavia for my wife not to mention Elproxsin and Chalama for me too.
Love it.
Exploring heavenly bodies
by
Morgen
Morgen
That's the first sci-fi sex story I've read, and it was quite worthwhile. :)
The best of both worlds
by
Morgen
Morgen
A very nice little story though it was a bit of a shame that the twist was so obvious; I'd guess it immediately upon reading "...because the guys couldn't handle her secret." in the first paragraph.
Daughter's sexy sight part 21
by
Morgen
Morgen
Awesome chapter.
I loved the guys sucking each other, and when Joleena gave her daddy back some of Kevin's spunk for him to swallow it was even better!
Re the like mother like daughter story, I did like the story, it just wasn't as well written. As much as I like this story you should definitely continue to experiment with new ones if you feel like it!
I loved the guys sucking each other, and when Joleena gave her daddy back some of Kevin's spunk for him to swallow it was even better!
Re the like mother like daughter story, I did like the story, it just wasn't as well written. As much as I like this story you should definitely continue to experiment with new ones if you feel like it!
Like mother, like daughter
by
Morgen
Morgen
A nice story but not quite as well written as some of your other more recent ones.
This seemed more like a list of events rather than a story. This seemed especially true of the first few paragraphs which didn't seem to flow at all and were instead short 8 word sentences strung one after the other.
I didn't see any dialogue at all, which you usually seem to do well.
As much as I was hoping they were going to start playing with each other, it was actually kind of refreshing in a weird sort of way, that they didn't! I guess I've read too many incest stories...
This seemed more like a list of events rather than a story. This seemed especially true of the first few paragraphs which didn't seem to flow at all and were instead short 8 word sentences strung one after the other.
I didn't see any dialogue at all, which you usually seem to do well.
As much as I was hoping they were going to start playing with each other, it was actually kind of refreshing in a weird sort of way, that they didn't! I guess I've read too many incest stories...