badlybent
Member Since October 19, 2009
Having Hannah
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dreamin
5177 days ago
badlybent
5649 days ago
dreamin
5177 days ago
badlybent
5649 days ago
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Great story and well written. It's hard to read because the font size is so small. Please use a larger one for us old fart without superman's vision. Full line breaks between paragraphs help too. I speed read and with the font size and lack of breaks
The Delight of Amber
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sik fuk
sik fuk
A well done story. Consider posting it on the SSP forum to. Now I have to go back and read the rest of your stories. Please give us more.
Mother and Son Bond - Part One
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MumSonIncestLad
MumSonIncestLad
Very well written. I good cliff hanger ending. Let us know what happens next. Good work.
My wild overnight in a hotel with Terra....(1st place Story Winner)
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Jolly1
Jolly1
This is an excellent story. No wonder it won a contest. The picture verson is well worth visiting too. It adds a lot. Great job Unsaved.
Slut Training I
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Dn2erth
Dn2erth
The story is very hot but did read more like a BDSM than a slut story.
Now you understand of course that L6 doesn't know the difference between fact and fiction, reality and fantasy. Plus he(she) is annoyed because he think it is in the wrong category
Now you understand of course that L6 doesn't know the difference between fact and fiction, reality and fantasy. Plus he(she) is annoyed because he think it is in the wrong category
The Willow Chronicles Part 2: Tara
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frozen_north
frozen_north
Willow and parts one and two are great reads. Hope there is more coming one day.
Caddy gets a loop
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fatblackanduglyasever
fatblackanduglyasever
I know people have had trouble with the server messing up the paragraphs. Maybe you started out with some. If so you should contact our system guy before you post again. Otherwise I very readable story. Keep writing. You're doing good.
Adam and Eve
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Hossrox
Hossrox
Good story and well written. Don't know what happened to the formating at first but it straightened out. Water sports was a nice twist from the usual daddy bangs daughter. Keep it up. More Adam and Eve Adventures would be great. Most of all have fun
Wicked Paradise 2: Best of Rivals
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Semigloss
Semigloss
You know it really suck when all those people read you stuff and can't even rate it. I like the Ice Queen better and could see how you were improving. Maybe one day you'll get back to using you talent. Thanks Badlybent.
Wedding Story Pt1 - The Bride
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prettytoes_and_phatassbooty
prettytoes_and_phatassbooty
Very well written. Thanks for posting it in the larger type too. It's so much more read able that way.
Willow
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frozen_north
frozen_north
Willow is the beginning of a great story. Hope the author finishes all of it someday.
Carolina Lake
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CalicoJack
CalicoJack
Yes feedback is in short supply on this site. Most people just read, jack off and run. Since you asked for feed back though. I thought your post read more like a description than a story. The whole thing was: I saw a little girl at a lake, raped, and
Part II, Kara, Captive and Slave Girl, Part II, Sold
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dick inkum
dick inkum
A great follow up to part !. I always enjoy your stories. Good work.
Lupus Dark Day
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Tsuldav
Tsuldav
You get extra points for a very creative story. Keep writing. You did good.
Josette Violation
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kremey
kremey
I read this when it was first submitted and forgot to rewiew it. I thought it was very good because it isn't just another run of the mill story. I Know they tried sadistic stuff like this at one time so it isn't hard to suspend disbelief. Good story.
The Party: Formal Ending
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lau
lau
Of the two endings I like this one a lot better. I don't know hat happended wih the underlines. They do distract some but it would be worse if the story were a long one.
Internet Rape- Part 1
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TheFox
TheFox
Too bad line breaks got messed up. But not hard to read. Keep writing it gets habit forming. Badlybent
Twisted Teen Tales 01
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jethro jodhpur
jethro jodhpur
Great Story hope there are more adventures. Thanks for a good read.
Forced mom
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Slim Summerville
Slim Summerville
Thanks for posting you're story. The only reason I gave three stars is because it's so short. It is really a scene. Nothing particularly wrong with that but more of a complete story would be better. Maybe you will write a part two and tell us more ab
Dad fucked me up the ass!
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thomascan4you
thomascan4you
What makes this so good is that it sounds very real and not all that over the top stuff that eventually gets boring. A good read.
Internet Chat-room
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tear_drops
tear_drops
Good story but sorry you got raped. You stopped on a cliff hanger so I await the ending. Thankf for the good read.
Some cops have all the luck.
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MusashiMiyamoto
MusashiMiyamoto
That's a good question. Is there a part two. If you like this kind of tale you might go to our sister site www.bluestories.com and read some of the stories by Deputy Duffy. You have to register seperately but it's no more difficult that registering her
A Walk in The Park
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cvnt
cvnt
Very Hot. Looking forward to the rest. You should join our forum and post there to. Get more readers and more feed back too.
Even If It Takes Forever
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
I could say WOW! or MY O MY! and you would get the point. One of the best SSP stories. Written by a pro. Wish you would post on our forum too although you couldn't post the link we would love you if you did.