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Discovering Cousin Ashley Parts 1-..April 2007 Story of the Month
badlybent 5686 days ago
- 10 + An absolutely great read. A good five star story.
My First Gangbang
badlybent 5686 days ago
- 8 + Great story Steff. I suspect that you started out with paragraphs and they got lost. I've heard that that happens here someimes Very hot you little cum dump you. Write more. We'll cum more.
Warehouse rape
badlybent 5686 days ago
- 8 + Not a bad effort. The ABC thing was distracting. People have names not letters so when you come to something like that it stops the readers scan and disrupts the flow. If you don't want to give people names you can give them descriptive characteristics
Amelia - Chapter 3- The first day and her second hole
badlybent 5686 days ago
- 5 + An excellent story.