RoughCuffKitten
Member Since October 19, 2009
Uncle Takes A Niece
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familyluvr
5213 days ago
RoughCuffKitten
5686 days ago
familyluvr
5213 days ago
RoughCuffKitten
5686 days ago
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awesome story. i think the buildup just made it better when they finally got down to it. the only part i had a problem with was that she was suddenly ready, and looking forward to, having not just any man's baby, but her uncle's. that was a little weird t
At long last
by
shareme
shareme
the whole im technique was a new way to tell a story, but it really could have been done better. maybe instead of a second chapter you should try a rewrite.
My Pantyhose Awakening
by
PantyhosePrincess
PantyhosePrincess
some paragraphs were a little long, but the story turned me on, even though i don't wear pantyhose and have never thought of them in a sexual way. i'm not saying that from now on i will or anything, but i did enjoy the story.
The Bet
by
smoothnwet
smoothnwet
pretty hot story. i got a little sick of the word "backdoor" but it's understandable considereing i don't recall seeing an entry for "asshole" in the thesaurus. great description though, especially from the girl's perspective.
The trip
by
mcholdrguy
mcholdrguy
hot story, even if not exactly incest. being a 19 year old girl myself, i'm very into teenage girl/middle aged man stories
Mr Mole discovers the Vagina, and how to make it Cum - Part Two
by
Moleuser
Moleuser
Very sexy, even better than the first. I look forward to more installments.
Fleeting Moments:
by
Avan Snow
Avan Snow
Very good start, actually well written and spaced. Many stories on this site are unreadable due to spelling and lack of paragraphs, but this is well done. The story development is interesting. I always enjoy stories more when I get caught up in the plot f
Mr Mole discovers the Vagina, and how to make it Cum
by
Moleuser
Moleuser
I enjoyed this story a lot. You're right about how to spot fiction :) those things get on my nerves sometimes. I will definitely read the sequel.
Man Pet
by
jezlady
jezlady
Wow! Your story is incredibly sexy, as well as incredibly well-written, which is more than I can say for many of the stories I've read here. No matter how good a premise is it's ruined for me when the story looks like it was written by a third grader. You
Favorite Cousins
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JohnnyJunior67
JohnnyJunior67
i couldn't even finish reading this the writing was so stupid. by the way, "I pushed my dick into her pelvis" pelvis is a bone, don't try getting creative, just say pussy. i'm thoroughly disgusted, not with the content, but the shitty writing of most of t
Marissa Gets A Surprise
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Naughty_Bear123
Naughty_Bear123
take as long as you want with the sequel, i'm sure no one will give a shit. this was one of the stupidest stories i've ever read. not only was it incredibly badly written, it wasn't even a little sexy. the writing style makes me think a 10 year old must h
Fucked by a hott older man.
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sunfire84
sunfire84
This story was unreadable. You're writing a story, not chatting on IM so get rid of the ;), wtf, *bites lip*, etc. It's ridiculous.
My wife and the yard boy
by
sugaray
sugaray
good premise, but finding out what happened by the wife and boy sitting there talking about it seemed a little awkward, as did the way a lot of it was phrased.
Charlenes Destiny
by
shadealtares
shadealtares
I seriously could not get through this because it's not broken up at all. Use paragraphs please, it sounds like a hot concept, but I'll never know because it hurts my eyes. Is this why masturbation supposedly makes you go blind?
Daddy's LIttle Girl
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MissSerious
MissSerious
great story, part two would be good, but i have to agree with allison about this dragon guy. it's sad that he spends his time copy-and-paste-ing a grammatically incorrect review on random dirty stories. he needs to get a life or at least write one story o
Julie's heartbreak led her to trouble...
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SashaDavy
SashaDavy
Sasha, I didn't think it was bad at all! I'll definitely be checking back for a part 2, hopefully soon :-)
Horny Sister
by
Mindmaster
Mindmaster
some of the "fuck your sister brother" talk was a little cheesy but otherwise very hot
Ms Cole
by
alan121
alan121
don't get me wrong, though personally i'm not into feet or piss, i can read about them and not have it gross me out much, in addition, young boy/older woman turns me on in almost any circumstance, but this was poorly written, no beginning, no ending, slop
Teacher Tussle
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GrandDefiler
GrandDefiler
your story was pretty good, but the writing style was distracting. it almost seems like english isn't your first language. if that's the case, good job. if not, you probably should have taken notes in english class instead of thinking about fucking the te
Forbidden Fruit
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dilligat
dilligat
you have the potential to be a good writer, i dont know if this is your first story or what, but the "twist" ending was stupid and i didnt know what sex the main character was until the last paragraph. it was sloppy storytelling but i think if you tried h
confused part 4
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seawoff
seawoff
part three was hotter to me when he touched thegirl while she slept, but i have been enjoying the stories and would like to read more.