
RoughCuffKitten
Member Since October 19, 2009
Sir William 2 (Very Bizarre Fictional Story)
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Soul
5426 days ago
RoughCuffKitten
5686 days ago


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though there is a lot going on, it's not the kind of action needed for a sex story. and even if i liked the story i can't think of any reason to justify calling it a class act as in the last comment. Robert Jones, you need to get out more, dear
Sir William (Very Bizarre Fictional Story)
hopefully part two will be betterm but all i can say for now is what the fuck? That was less sex story and more nightmare i'd have after taking acid and watching porn or something.
Foster Daughter 3
I'd love to read more chapters, please write them :)
Amateur Glamour Model
The previous poster is quite right, you NEED paragraphs. I have no idea if this is a good story or not because I can't keep my place.
The Storm
i couldn't even finish the story. i scanned it ti see if it got better, but sadly no.
Nice Party II
that was very hot, though it was short. great ending! left me wanting more, you tease ;)
Two Cent Whore
terrific story, great writing, and as a sidenote to the "assfuck" guest, i've read things crueler on this site, including stories where you could tell that the more someone is totured the harder the author got. at least this girl got the guy back.
The Potion
i thought the premise was very good, but i definitely agree with the last post about controlling the !!'s. i've read several of your stories and enjoyed them except for that. i found them to be not only distracting but actually a little irritating. otherw
Gang Rave
hot sex, good details, but "Danielle grabbed and pulled the hair of her fellatist" fellatio is cock-sucking, pussy-licking is cunnilingus, unless i'm mistaken, fallatist means cock-sucker. other than that, i loved the story and will definitely read more