Alright, ya'll. Please give me some honest feedback and opinions about this. Im trying to critique ability to tell a story. Let me know if it's too long, too wordy, hard to follow, boring, whatever. I have alot more but I want to be sure they're worth reading before I submit them. Thanks!!







Marcus sat on the cold floor in the corner of the female prison laundry room, staring up at

Last winter was one of the harshest and coldest in our region. Up to six feet of snow total for the year. But it was one of the most enjoyable for me. A true story with a few minor embellishments.



It was our third snowstorm that season and I had already gone out and done my shopping earlier that week in anticipation of the one they called "The Motherlode". They were expecti