ObKv
Member Since October 19, 2009
Dana and Nick's special sex
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misstrouble
5101 days ago
ObKv
5573 days ago
misstrouble
5101 days ago
ObKv
5573 days ago
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You should try building it up better and making the sex last longer and become more detailed in description, as well as the oral sex and masturbation. If you do that, I'm sure it would turn out great!
Broken but Whole
by
TruthTeller
TruthTeller
You rushed the sex too much and it wasnt descriptive enough. The other parts were alright,though would a mom really want a guy sleeping over a girls house at that age for an entire weekend?
Boating brother sister
by
hotchick2724
hotchick2724
that was a pain in the ass to read because of the lack of line breaks. Also, the rushed sex was a bit dissapointing. He also recovered too quickly in my opinion.
Visiting my cousins: part 1
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jasonxxx91
jasonxxx91
This is really good so far! I sure do hope you right more!