
Faustus
Member Since October 19, 2009
2 Weeks with my cum luving sister ( Part 2 )
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XAshleyX
5175 days ago
Faustus
5647 days ago


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Ashley, I absolutely need more of this. NOW!
Cousins compare
Well, your story has some good qualities and bad ones too. You have a good story and it's deffinately a cliff hanger, but your spelling and punctuation is terrible. Also, try and put some more detail in to make it a bit longer and a better read. I suggest
Visiting my cousins: part 1
It was an excellant story but we all need more of this. Hop to it man.
what I did when I was 13, and kept doing. -Part 1-
Love the story continue soon, please!