This is a long story, much more than the short bit that I posted here. It is still very much a work in progress and is a dance between cultures. Not everything is as it seems, for there are a few twists and turns.



If you are looking for a fast hot 3 paragraph and your done thing (much like your high school prom) then look elsewhere. Creative criticism is welcome! I *did* mean it

My first ever story submission and not like anything I typically read on here. Yep, it's a long one.



Young and overly sheltered, Melissa goes camping with her older sister and her friends. The situation takes some turns and leads to her first sexual encounters.



This is a slow-build-up kind of story, nothing rushed. Feedback is appreciated