DarkAssassin
Member Since October 19, 2009
Unbelieveable
by
chumpstain
5102 days ago
DarkAssassin
5573 days ago
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7
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I agree with the last review. It was very good, just think about trying for a bit more length and/or description.
Naughty next door - A teacher gets taught
Every once in a while I stumble across a story on this site that makes me wonder whether the author has published works or not. This is one of them - amazingly written. You are very skilled... Keep up the good work.
The Start of a Beautiful Friendship, pt. 2: Secret Girlfriend
This is, without doubt, the best story I've seen on this site so far. Well, actually, it's been tied once - by the last one in the series. I write some myself - if not erotica - and I can honestly say this is amazing work. If you don't keep writing until
The Sitter and The Setter pt. 2
The only real problem I had was that you took about three-quarters of the story to get to the mounting. I appreciate the attention to every detail, but licking and foreplay really just don't interest me.
Visiting my cousins: part 1
You're actually a fairly good writer, unlike most of the people on this site. So, uh, please do people like me a favor and continue it. I don't want to see a good writer go to waste.
Angel Alice 2: The Start of Something Beautiful
I must admit that you are a very good writer. Still a bit of work to do, of course - nobody's perfect - but you're much better than most. I like the way you - or, rather, Joe - thinks about sex, too. Keep up the good work.