Chuck100
Member Since June 08, 2010
It shouldn't have happened but it did
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klm0559
5404 days ago
Chuck100
5386 days ago
klm0559
5404 days ago
Chuck100
5386 days ago
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Very good story line you just need to break it up so that it reads easier. Don't rush to climax just like real sex you have to build the suspense first, you do this by giving more details and about what the characters are doing and what they are feeling
End Of The World
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Luv2K155
Luv2K155
The start was a little too long but the story moved along keep it up great read!! :)
You Have No More HARD Feelings Tonight?"
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shhhh
shhhh
Gr8 story you will have to finish what happened with her husband.
Late Night Romance
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blondie333
blondie333
Good story but try to build the suspense more don't rush the seen it would of been nice to hear more about them touching and gradually becoming more amorous.
There Can Be Only One Ch 33
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Nastyman
Nastyman
Great story keep it up! I have recommended your story to other new writers as an example of descriptive writing style which makes you feel as though you are there.
There Can Be Only One Ch 33
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Nastyman
Nastyman
Nastyman it has been quite some time since your last entry please submit another chapter
There Can Be Only One Ch 33
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Nastyman
Nastyman
I do believe that I have now read each story several times now. Looking forward to the next chapter in the saga of Ross and his family.
There Can Be Only One Ch 32
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Nastyman
Nastyman
WOW another great story, easy reading and great detail makes you think you are there. looking forward to the next chapter.
My Sexy House Help
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setanrhodes
setanrhodes
gr8 story but changing perspective is confusing unless you make it known who is speaking by referencing early on in the paragraph. keep it up interesting plot and good details.
my wife fucked by a stranger in a restaurant
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crosser
crosser
Gr8 hope you are working on their next tail.
The Park Chapter 2
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Nastyman
Nastyman
It has been awhile since you posted any new park stories I hope you don't let it fade away:(