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Lucky Stone pt 8
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 4 + The descriptions of the sex were "okay". I like a little narrative and some convincing dialogue in the best stories and it's not here, I'm afraid.
Linda's Cherry is Popped!
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 0 + I hate rape stories generally, but this is badly written dross.
Like Father, Like Son Part 3
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 10 + Hey out there! I'm still pretty new at this and any feedback would be welcome. I'd like to know if it's worth me completing part 4 of this story, as I hope it will be appreciated.
Like Father, Like Son Part 3
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 0 + Thanks for this readers, I can't tell you how much I'm grateful to hear that I'm hitting the right note. Any further comments are welcome. I'm sorry that part 3 was posted twice - I guess that's my impatience! Part 4 has ben submitted and I think you will
Like Father, Like Son part 2
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 10 + Thanks for all the encouraging feedback guys (and maybe gals?). Part 3 is written and posted, but our host seems to be on holiday. Part 4 is in preparation.

Both are so hot you'll be reaching for the ice-bucket, I promise.

The voice of Arthur Smith!
Like Father, Like Son
Arthursmith 5304 days ago
- 10 + Excellent. One of the most erotic ever. Keep it up, I can't wait to read the next instalment