User ziks511 | Commented | Sex Stories Post

Spencer84 4853 days ago

ziks511 4831 days ago

- 0 + If the story looks hot enough, like this one did, I copy the whole thing into NotePad, and punctuate it as I read it. Often I change little bits that are not to my taste. This one was rougher than I like so I toned that down just a bit (not the part about throwing Jason out). I file them under NotePad with all the authors information still intact. I'm sufficiently paranoid that if I ever get hit by the police, it's not my work, and I can deal with the bullying over it. "Oh, so this is what you like, little girls." "Excuse me officer, but there are little girls being married in the Bible."

The Kingdom of Fuck by

glitter_fantastic 4859 days ago

ziks511 4831 days ago

- 0 + Read only little bits of it. It's unreadable as the great uninterrupted block of text, That's one criticism.

The other is that the violence isn't exciting it's crude and a turn off.

Lilly and Tasty get Nasty by

Sexybadgirl911 4901 days ago

ziks511 4831 days ago

- 0 + Agree with Ccbaby. A very good start on writing sexy stories. I like the subject matter, I like the passion, "slammmed her into the wall" etc. You need a spell checker for after you've finished writing, when they pop up in the middle of writing they can throw you right off your flow of ideas. Unfortunately spelling mistakes can turn off your readers. Also about 50% or more longer would be nice. It's really nice to get comfortable to read, and have enough to read to get you off by the end.

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