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zain Member Since October 19, 2009
My older sister Bella part2
zain 5543 days ago
- 4 + Good story but could be better
Behind The Music/Hannah Montana: A Truly Beautiful Nightingale
zain 5543 days ago
- 4 + good story,could be better
The Air Mattress
zain 5543 days ago
- 1 + DAMM.....YOU DONT NEED TO USE CAPS LOCK ALL THE TIME..IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU ARE SHOUTING THE SENTENCES.....jeeze....

and you could improve on your grammer.....My 5year old brother can do better that that