yoyoyo5
Member Since June 13, 2010
My Incest Girl
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Blackroses
5616 days ago
yoyoyo5
5616 days ago
Blackroses
5616 days ago
yoyoyo5
5616 days ago
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i didn't find a problem with paragraphs. anyway great story I do have a suggestion. it was very well written but when he was reading the magazine and describing it it wasn't just telling you what was in the mag it gave his opinion which is good but got really boring and made the story feel longer