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xxxman69 Member Since October 19, 2009
A day in a life
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 4 + very well written
my mom caught me
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 2 + good but somewhat unrealistic
Failure
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 4 + interesting 3rd person view, great story:)
My New Neighbors - 1
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 3 + you also repeated 1 paragraph but other than that good
My Wife Barb 5
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 3 + work on spelling and grammer but otherwise really good
My stepmom and I
xxxman69 5542 days ago
- 3 + good but somewhat unrealistic on how fast everything happened and how casual it was between the step mom and son