
xxxman69
Member Since October 19, 2009
A day in a life
by
styxx
5134 days ago
xxxman69
5606 days ago


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very well written
my mom caught me
good but somewhat unrealistic
Failure
interesting 3rd person view, great story:)
My New Neighbors - 1
you also repeated 1 paragraph but other than that good
My Wife Barb 5
work on spelling and grammer but otherwise really good
My stepmom and I
good but somewhat unrealistic on how fast everything happened and how casual it was between the step mom and son