writethis69
Member Since September 17, 2010
Dick in Jane - Ch9 - Put the Romans To Shame
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writethis69
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Thanks for the comments. The dam story seemed to just need more chapters. I am actually very glad to finish it as endless re-reads required to catch errors and smooth things out started to make me sick of the story but comments like yours makes the time worth while.
Dick in Jane - Ch9 - Put the Romans To Shame
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writethis69
writethis69
Yes you caught a couple of errors. One becomes blind to such things when you are doing your own proof reading. Oh well the stories are free so I guess you get what you pay for. I am glad you liked them anyway.
My Son The Inventor - Ch5 - Like an episode from the Simpsons
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writethis69
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I enjoyed writing this one. I am not an anal fan so I doubt that any of my stories will have that kind of action but you never know. Thanks for your comments.
My Son The Inventor - Ch4 - Its all in your head
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writethis69
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I have trouble figuring out the style people like in these stories. There seems to be two categories "slam-bam-thank-you-mam" and an actual drawn out story.
I have submitted several now (including 10 anonymously) and have been surprised by the ratings. Ones that I figured would be a hit were not while others got higher ratings than expected.
I am currently writing a little sister with three brothers story which I suspect you will like. Look out for a "Dick in Jane" series. It may be a while as my spelling and written grammar is so poor I need to read the stories over and over to catch most of the flaws.
I have submitted several now (including 10 anonymously) and have been surprised by the ratings. Ones that I figured would be a hit were not while others got higher ratings than expected.
I am currently writing a little sister with three brothers story which I suspect you will like. Look out for a "Dick in Jane" series. It may be a while as my spelling and written grammar is so poor I need to read the stories over and over to catch most of the flaws.
Thanks for your kind words. I was concerned that the story would be perceived as too preachy which is definitely not what I meant to convey. Outside of publishing the usual sex fantasies, I wanted to wrap our society's confusing trends and messages into a story. The references here reminds me of the arguments about violent video games and their influence on kids. A generation after Duke Nukem can anyone categorically say that a recent generations of adults are more violent? Certainly all types of media is but I not so sure about people. Maybe fifty years from now the answers will be obvious and I sure as hell hope the results are benign.