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watchandtell Member Since October 19, 2009
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3
watchandtell 5542 days ago
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by Putitinherbutt ( reply )

You really need to take this back to the drawing board. Check your grammar. Use spell check. Make it longer and have an actual plot. On the plus side you did use paragraphs.

Its pathetic or some
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watchandtell 5542 days ago
- 0 + (I am from a small town in North Dakota pop about 30,000?????)

More likely you are from the Eastern Block North Dresden perhaps, your grammar stinks, the storyline could be a good one.

However, you do not portray the story theme very well, making chap