walkindude
Member Since October 19, 2009
Ashley...naughty fun with Uncle Dave
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ashley_teenslut
5070 days ago
walkindude
5542 days ago
ashley_teenslut
5070 days ago
walkindude
5542 days ago
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and i liked the first one..... however, it doesnt leave much realism.... i mean i dont think a 13 year old girl would act that way.... i dunno... maybe if she was more naive, it might be more realistic.... but whatever, good story...
Stepmom & Me, first storyyy. so plzz have mercy while rating
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The Steantorian
The Steantorian
i would have mercy, but there isnt enough to have mercy on...
sleep over
by
watchout
watchout
100% grade F $hit. Why anyone would take the time to submit this garbage is an insult.
Anna: Unwilling?
by
dsaun
dsaun
would like to see more... you fixed the text wall... its good now.... it could be great.... keep at it
Anna: Unwiling?
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dsaun
dsaun
I'm sorry, but i cant read a text wall....
probably a good story, but who knows?
probably a good story, but who knows?
Jerked by a Young Guy
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lastcallg
lastcallg
C'mon man, GIVE ME SOMETHING I CAN USE! i literally read this in a faster time than it took me to get here... AND I HAVE COMCAST!
Try harder
Try harder
once again
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fireyhand
fireyhand
how the hell could the moderators put this love not on a site.... this isnt the forum section, this is the full blown story section. I dont think you had 2 complete sentences there.... what the hell.
A Family Affair (part one)
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schooner
schooner
2 or 3 more paragraphs of buildup would have been nice. From my point of view, your better at writing the sex itsself than a real plot, however what most ssp writers dont understand is that the plot is more important than the sex.
Keep trying, i'm sur
Keep trying, i'm sur
Back of the Bus
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Scribe
Scribe
like, seriously..... if this story doesnt end, OR if it ends and things turn out any worse for andy, i'll be sad...
I'm waiting for part 2
I'm waiting for part 2
The Discovery
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ChristyCr23
ChristyCr23
has great potential....
mybe more unique plot elements would have been nice, but generally the writing was good.
mybe more unique plot elements would have been nice, but generally the writing was good.
First time with daddy
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wyldewynd
wyldewynd
poorly written, went for big type because it was so short. Not realistic. I'm gonna say this once: when you say daddy in a story, it doesnt make it instantly erotic.
Things That Go Bump in the Night
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Temptress4
Temptress4
kind of a stereotypical stpry, but written exceptionally well....
I reccomend you write another story, but try tohave a bit more inventive plot.....good story though.
I reccomend you write another story, but try tohave a bit more inventive plot.....good story though.
An A for Effort
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gokothegiant
gokothegiant
Decent to good writing, but lacking realism. If you would have made the girl not such a slut able to handle a cock as big as you say, then it would have made more sense. or, you could have increased her age.
Geena's First Time With Mom
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Geena
Geena
Great story but really not believable at all.......keep writing though, because it was unique and erotic.
The Trouble With Alana
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hillarysmuff
hillarysmuff
all in a word... decent characters, good dialouge, nice plot.... i thoroughly enjoyed it.
The Arcade
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ParentsNotHome
ParentsNotHome
to the point. nice buildup. seems a bit far fetched,but hey, i dont think theres going to be much realistic dialouge in a sex story about a 12 year old.....
I look forward to more of your stories
I look forward to more of your stories