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typicalusername Member Since October 19, 2009
The Unexpected Fuck For The Cutest Little Duff!
typicalusername 5542 days ago
- 1 + rushed, unrealistic, forced, and get an anatomy book
Icy Hot
typicalusername 5542 days ago
- 10 + great story, continue writing
The Sexy Lindsay Lohan
typicalusername 5542 days ago
- 10 + glad to see you're back, this has the makings of a great series
Girls Locker Room Fun
typicalusername 5542 days ago
- 10 + great story, but next time stretch it out a bit more, proofread it, and think of a better ending
Carolyn in the Morning
typicalusername 5542 days ago
- 7 + use a spell checker, and don't make it quite so rushed. other than that it was great!