tj68
Member Since October 19, 2009
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 & 2
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tj68
tj68
I know the bedroom description is a bit much; but I plan on using that room ALOT, so I want readers to have a good mental image of it.
BTW, I'm thinking about changing the title to "Freinds & Neighbors".
What do you think?
Thanks for the feedback!
BTW, I'm thinking about changing the title to "Freinds & Neighbors".
What do you think?
Thanks for the feedback!
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 - 4
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tj68
tj68
Chapters 1 - 4 are all there.
If you didn't see them, maybe your connection sucked.
OedipusRex
If you didn't see them, maybe your connection sucked.
OedipusRex
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 - 4
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tj68
tj68
I spell check this thing constantly.
What did I miss?
IF you're referring to "Dwan", I thought I fixed that before posting.
Please post what you found.
Thanks.
OedipusRex
(I just finished 7 & 8. They turned out as good as chapter 1(I think); bu
What did I miss?
IF you're referring to "Dwan", I thought I fixed that before posting.
Please post what you found.
Thanks.
OedipusRex
(I just finished 7 & 8. They turned out as good as chapter 1(I think); bu
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 - 4
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tj68
tj68
Wow! Thanks for the input.
I'm not sure where this is going.
The best chapters end up groing out something I just throw in.
The room was described because I thought I'd use it alot.
It was over the top, though.
As to Sarah's history, I 'll be introd
I'm not sure where this is going.
The best chapters end up groing out something I just throw in.
The room was described because I thought I'd use it alot.
It was over the top, though.
As to Sarah's history, I 'll be introd
2 Families, 1 Vacation Chapters 1 - 4
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tj68
tj68
I posted the next 2 chapters 8 days ago.
Either there are a lot of stories being posted, or it got lost.
Not sure who to contact to find out.
Anyone know?
OedipusRex
Either there are a lot of stories being posted, or it got lost.
Not sure who to contact to find out.
Anyone know?
OedipusRex
Friends and Neighbors - Chapters 1 - 8
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tj68
tj68
I agree, Jessica. Sorry.
There's too much going on; and I can't seem to get past Tuesday.
I need to rewrite some of this to get to the vacation soon.
I think I wrote those last 2 chapters out of laziness. It was just easier to let the story go off th
There's too much going on; and I can't seem to get past Tuesday.
I need to rewrite some of this to get to the vacation soon.
I think I wrote those last 2 chapters out of laziness. It was just easier to let the story go off th
Slow the storyline down a bit, and provide more detail.
I look forward to part2.