sweepified
Member Since October 19, 2009
Babbysitting became fun
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Trix1985
5082 days ago
sweepified
5554 days ago
Trix1985
5082 days ago
sweepified
5554 days ago
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Not a bad concept, but I wish there were more sexual details in there. You dont just shove 3 fingers in any womans pussy - no matter how loose she is! and even if you did, she wouldn't have felt an 8 inch dick after that. Slow down, remember whatever you
Changed in a day.
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Trozeg
Trozeg
Dude - I realize you were going for a life story type of deal, but this is a SEX stories sight...for you to have such a great experience, you must remember some of the more interesting details. Good length, pretty good grammar, but not enough of a sex vib
Two brothers two girls and great fun
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Dawn_1
Dawn_1
Definitely one of the best I've read in a while...don't worry about justin's comment ~ he's prob. lucky to ever have one gf. It doesn't really matter whether it's fiction or not - it's good writing! I could definitely see the whole thing playing out in my
A Night to Remember
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Rerah
Rerah
Dude ~ first off, this was so short I was finished reading before I got halfway through my cigarette! A good story needs to be at least 2 pages long in word 12pt font. Secondly, the sex scene descriptions could use a lil work...you sound like a 13 year ol
Noc 5
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enchrine
enchrine
Definitely good, but for new readers, it would be easier if you could link the other four to this one.
Getting Something out of a broken leg
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ian123
ian123
Absolutely fucking awesome! Definitely looking forward to part 2! Hopefully it will have some of her friends (just be careful not to write about anyone under 13, or they will delete your story!) There were a few grammatical problems, but that was easily o