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smarius3 Member Since October 19, 2009
Watching my sexually inexperienced, 58 y.o. wife enjoying a well-endowed 19 y.o. black lad
smarius3 4704 days ago
- 0 + Well written, and very erotic and enjoyable.
Kidnapping Keri
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 6 + That was pretty hot!
He Was a Dirty Dog--and So Was I
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 6 + I enjoyed it.
My First Flight
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 0 + Didn't even want to attempt to wade through one long paragraph. It might be good, and even attract more people to read it if you punctuate and format properly.
Memories of a Slave - Chapter One
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 2 + The correct words: A LOT. If you're going to use it a lot, then spell it right.

Disgusting
Starting Over
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 1 + There's grammar, and spelling. This reads like it was written by a dirty-minded 10 year old.

Ever heard of paragraphs?

This story sucked.
Diary of a Nympho
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 10 + Here's someone who knows how to write a STORY!
Diary of a Nympho
smarius3 5649 days ago
- 10 + Here's someone who knows how to write a STORY! It's got just the right amount of lead-in to set up the story, but not be boring. And it makes it an interesting read. Great sex too!

Keep up the great writing!