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skinwalker Member Since October 19, 2009
Health Class and some help from dad
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 1 + good start but lacked detailes
Young Moisture
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 7 + A little short but cute. Keep writing.
She's mom
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 4 + the story started out well then I ran into a wall of TEXT and stoped reading
Icy Hot
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 7 + OK you have a start now were do you go?
Me And My Sister Sneek In
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 3 + nice intro were is the story
Desperate Mother
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 4 + please break up the text this solid block is tough to read nice story other wise
Tammy and Dave
skinwalker 5543 days ago
- 5 + please go to a bookstore and pick up a copy of "the plain english handbook" any edition. It will do wonders for your writing