skinwalker
Member Since October 19, 2009
Health Class and some help from dad
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Dianadoodah
5071 days ago
skinwalker
5543 days ago
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good start but lacked detailes
Young Moisture
A little short but cute. Keep writing.
She's mom
the story started out well then I ran into a wall of TEXT and stoped reading
Icy Hot
OK you have a start now were do you go?
Me And My Sister Sneek In
nice intro were is the story
Desperate Mother
please break up the text this solid block is tough to read nice story other wise
Tammy and Dave
please go to a bookstore and pick up a copy of "the plain english handbook" any edition. It will do wonders for your writing