silvermare
Member Since October 19, 2009
Our Senior Trip
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bigdick90
5187 days ago
silvermare
5659 days ago
bigdick90
5187 days ago
silvermare
5659 days ago
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Wonderful story, please make more!
At camp chapter 3
by
silvermare
silvermare
I'm really sorry! I was writing this throughout my workday, and I didn't have time to put in much detail. I will be putting in more detail in the next chapter.
MY wifes bitch
by
NCbarno007
NCbarno007
Hey, here is a bit of help to fix your story:
1. Use punctuation, quotations, commas, and periods
2. clarify, make it more erotic, I can orgasm at pretty much anything, but with this story, I was dry
3. Men can't wear thongs! maybe something else would
1. Use punctuation, quotations, commas, and periods
2. clarify, make it more erotic, I can orgasm at pretty much anything, but with this story, I was dry
3. Men can't wear thongs! maybe something else would
One stormy night
by
wildmanchuck
wildmanchuck
I really liked this story! Please continue! Wonderful plot, ideas, and ways to tell. WONDERFUL! I had to stop halfway through to get a dildo!
Accepting him as my master
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GirlWhoLovesPain
GirlWhoLovesPain
Very good, a few grammatical problems, but a very descriptive, enjoyable story. PLEASE WRITE MORE!