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Me and my Brother by

WTFISUP2424 5071 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 1 + Number one: Use a spell checker

Number two: think out your storie BEFORE You

start Writing it

A Curious Little Sister (Part 2) by

Diabolos 5071 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- -1 + would have been good had you rememberd to space out your paragraphs.....

My Turn (Pt. 1) by

storieteller 5071 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 6 + It has patental

A Family In Love by

lmsyd4u 5071 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 10 + i cant Beleave i even read this, No kind of storie what so ever

No Paragraphs no Qotations, no plot no nothing but a bunch of words......please never Write a storie agein in your life

How I Compelled My Own Madam,My Boss,To Have Sex With Me! by

Orgasm_teacher 5071 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 1 + dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

Continuing saga with my niece Sara by

kev922 5148 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 10 + I like it, one of the better stories out there

Skating Rink by

hornylisa 5424 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 6 + Paragraphs, font size and a better plot

Try reading stories

that get good reveiws and see how they write.

you have Patential but need to find it

Dominatrix Sister part 4 by

uosdwisrdewoh 5534 days ago

schmee 5542 days ago

- 1 + But dont write another storie like the 4th one agein.....