safarijim
Member Since October 19, 2009
nans foot fetish 2
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tomqaz1
5071 days ago
safarijim
5542 days ago
tomqaz1
5071 days ago
safarijim
5542 days ago
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I like your story and where your taking it. You should really look into making your chapters longer.
Pea Pod Pt3
by
Wholeman
Wholeman
Fantastic story my friends loved it. I hope you will write more chapters, if you need some ideas for the next chapter e-mail me at blaquetears@gmail.com
Cumming to A Realization...(Part 3)
by
PinkBunny
PinkBunny
you took the story in an excellent direction, could have been longer though. i wondered what the mom thought about all this. Cant wait for the next chapter
part two
by
Shard
Shard
part two of what? and you need more than 1 page stories. More plot, more detail would be nice
Cumming to A Realization...(Part 2)
by
PinkBunny
PinkBunny
nice lead in at the end makes me wanna read the chapters to come. Try making your chapters a little longer tough
My Name is Jacob chp.1 Discovering my Powers
by
Sextopics
Sextopics
Should probably work on the length of your chapters maybe develope some other main characters maybe the girl from bk bas powers who knows. Be sure to throw some twists in there throughout the series.
Family Traditions Prt 1
by
azrael07
azrael07
cool intro to what could be an excellent story. cant wait for chapter 2. try and make the chapters a little longer though
The Thrill Of Taboo (part 5)
by
britneyh80@yahoo.com
britneyh80@yahoo.com
This story is great i would really like to see more chapters of it. I like that your chapters are long. I check the site daily so ill be waiting =)
Confessions in the family room
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mutterguffin1
mutterguffin1
Good story cant wait for the next sexscapade. but yea if you just seperate the paragraphs it will be much less intimidating to read and youll prolly get more feedback as well.
Tasha and I at the Gloryhole Party 2
by
mrking
mrking
Great story, i like the direction your story is going and i cant wait for the next chapter.
Mother-Daughter catfight to the death and Necrobabes
by
PunkMaister
PunkMaister
Thats some dark story, good read tho just wish it was a little longer