ryanford1900
Member Since October 19, 2009
Lovely Jessica
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grant1865
5071 days ago
ryanford1900
5543 days ago
grant1865
5071 days ago
ryanford1900
5543 days ago
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Very well written. Please consider joining the SSP Forum and posting with us too. Good authors are always very welcome.
Casual Sex
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snare109
snare109
Not bad snare. You know how to write and tell a story which is more than a lot of the people who post here. You should consider joining us in the SSP forum. New authors are always appreciated. Just click on Forum above and check us out. We're all pa
In the abanded high school.
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FakeConscience
FakeConscience
Nothing wrong with the story it'self. The italics thing is very distracting. Just use dialogue atribution. All you have to do is use, he said, she said or asked as the case may be and we'll know whose talking. You got the quotation marks right so just
It all started innocently enough...
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El_Perro_Gordo
El_Perro_Gordo
Very well written. Please continue and consider joining the SSP forum and posting it with us to. Good authors are always appreciated. Just click forums in the panel above and check us out. Thanks and keep writing.
Have you been a good Girl?
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publisher
publisher
Very well written. Don't know why it hasn't been reviewed. You should consider joining the SSP forum and posting you're stories with us too. Good writers are always welcome. We always have a Christmas contest. Maybe you could save this one and post i
Finally Fucking Joanna
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zepper
zepper
Very well writen. You write well and know how to tell an actual story. Please post in the larger type in the future. It's hard for people with glasses to read the little stuff. You should check us out at the SSP forum and post with us to. Good write