reeb
Member Since October 19, 2009
Neighbors Ch. 01
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jessy19
5070 days ago
reeb
5542 days ago
jessy19
5070 days ago
reeb
5542 days ago
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5
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Some basic writing skills, PLEASE use paragraphs to break up your story. Once you get past the WALL OF WORDS, it's not a bad story so I gave you 5 stars. With paragraphs, probably alot more. Thanks and keep writing.
Maria's Cumming Out
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
Excellent story. In my opinion, a virgin must be taken gently the forst time. Please continue. Thanks.