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pun82 Member Since April 18, 2016
My Mother, The Fraternity Whore Part 1 by WildWest 2545 days ago
pun82 2253 days ago
- 0 + First I will say this, your story is hot. I blew my load 4x while reading; however, it is very painful too read. Every sentence is littered with misspellings, sentence fragments, punctuation errors, and very poor grammar. I know this meant to be a fun read and everything, but being an English professor, I can't help but to sound overly critical.
My Brother and I Share a Girl (Part 1) by JamieBores 4214 days ago
pun82 2267 days ago
- 1 + Whatever happened to Part 2? Would really like to know how the encounter ended!