
plobster
Member Since October 19, 2009
Aunt Sarah
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brentoes
5327 days ago
plobster
5606 days ago


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The storyline was pretty good. The spelling was okay. The punctuation and grammar were near nonexistant. Where are your paragraphs? Any person with less patience than I (98% of the readers on this site) would take one look at this big block of words and s