nakedscot
Member Since October 19, 2009
The story of my first time(s)
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editor
5071 days ago
nakedscot
5543 days ago
editor
5071 days ago
nakedscot
5543 days ago
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your story got my cock hard right away when you started describing to Sue about your "gang bang" first time. I like your naughty language too -- maybe spice it up a little more by describing how good it feels when the guys cock starts squirting hot jizz
After the Rape (part 2) Repost/Updated
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ErotiqueWriter
ErotiqueWriter
Would like more description of how Taby's cunt feels to her men & how their cocks feel inside her cunt. Let Taby get really raunchy as she lets them know she wants to fuck. Use "jizz" & "jism" in place of "cum". Overall, good story !
Foster Parents
by
phang
phang
You are a very good writer. I really enjoy your story lines. I would have given you a higher rating if you had more detail description of how their cunts felt as they were being fucked. The same is true for how the cocks felt as the cunts massaged them
Pleasure at Sundown (Reposted)
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Jman122
Jman122
I gave you a medium rating mostly for not proof reading your own story -- many misspelled words, & wrong word meanings !! Everyone uses "cum" -- try "jizz" or "jism" for more eroticism.