menow82
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Delight of Amber
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sik fuk
5101 days ago
menow82
5573 days ago
sik fuk
5101 days ago
menow82
5573 days ago
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5
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excellent, when will you post another one?
I was supposed to be baby sitting
by
davidj
davidj
Well done :) i enjoyed this one, hope you write some more one day.
I was supposed to be baby sitting
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davidj
davidj
Well done :) i enjoyed this one, hope you write some more one day.
Prison Guard's Dog Slut
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Parkstranger
Parkstranger
Bad grammar and short on description and length, better luck next time.
An orgie you have to read
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rj0708
rj0708
Decent enough but didn't really do it for me, also confusing "Where" with "Were" annoyed me, sorry!
The Robsons CHAPTER 5
by
Narrator123
Narrator123
Very well written and extremely enjoyable to read, I look forward to the next chapter!
FUCKED BY A PIG FARMERS FAMILY
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handy69
handy69
I found this to be very mediocre. Bad spelling/grammar, and the story itself was boring and i wouldn't really call it "Forced".
Better luck next time.
Better luck next time.
Horse love
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davidj
davidj
My mum has bred horses since before i was born, i have NEVER seen a stallion that was NOT interested in a mare. I have also never seen a stallion with a penis that was "almost a meter" 1 foot long yes, maybe a foot and a half. Try being more realistic in
Pleasure and Pain
by
freedom37803
freedom37803
Bad grammar, spelling, switch of 1st and 3rd person. For the concepts of the story too short and lacking description and emotional details essential to make it enjoyable. No real action made it worse and the action that was there had very little heat to i
Jack & Donna.......& Nicole, Chapter 17, The Conclusion
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DJN57
DJN57
I've just read the whole 17 chapters and loved every one of them. I really hope you will write some more one day :)
Brown's shoe store I
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Slickman2000
Slickman2000
Nice work there :) I'd like to read a sequel.
Perhaps there could have been a bit more "action" at the party but other than that a great story :)
Perhaps there could have been a bit more "action" at the party but other than that a great story :)
Danny's Dream - Chapter Seven
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jezlady
jezlady
Another great chapter, not as much action as some of the others but it keeps the story flowing very well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Finola
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kyooko
kyooko
Please use correct grammar! The story in itself was half decent but the terrible grammar totally takes away from it, sorry!
Finola
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kyooko
kyooko
Please use correct grammar! The story in itself was half decent but the terrible grammar totally takes away from it, sorry!
Ooops! forgot to change the rating...
Ooops! forgot to change the rating...
To this day I still love you
by
lushlips
lushlips
Great story, kind of reminds me of how i met my boyfriend :) Aside from a couple of tiny spelling mistakes i can't find a problem, great job :)
Danny's Dream - Chapter Six
by
vexes
vexes
Extremely well written and hot! I love this series and cannot wait for the next installment!
Back Room Fun
by
ausjiml
ausjiml
It would have been better if they had sex with her as well..not bad but not my thing
Piano Pussy part 1
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jslee3725
jslee3725
Kinda happened all a bit too fast but i liked it, try to be a bit more descriptive with the sex part and how they are feeling in part 2 :)
Dinah's Humiliation
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Lady_Courtesan83
Lady_Courtesan83
I liked it :) Well written and there was some heat to it, perhaps you could write another sometime :)
Back of the Bus
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Scribe
Scribe
Need to work on grammar a little bit, story not to my taste but for what it was it was reasonably well written, if there is a part 2 the girl should be involved.
1 Husband + 3 of His Bestfriends = Gangbang on Wife
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rj0708
rj0708
Good story but it needed to be longer and more descriptive. Grammar and sentence structure could be improved also.
Liz gets knocked out and knocked up
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SexKitten83
SexKitten83
one tip...Don't use bright green as a font, the only way i could read it was to highlight it.
Bad grammar, not very descriptive, lacked any heat...sorry.
Bad grammar, not very descriptive, lacked any heat...sorry.
Liz gets knocked out and knocked up
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SexKitten83
SexKitten83
gotta remember to change the rating when i post...
Getting it Straight
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mrjjones
mrjjones
Enjoyed this story very much. Well written and believeable :) I hope you write another one soon :)
First
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LittleCutie6969
LittleCutie6969
if you write more pelase use a spellchecker! other than the spelling not a bad little story
More of My 14th Summer
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elainepwl
elainepwl
Very well written and descriptive! Loved it and hope to hear another story from you soon :)
Dad Wants Daughter. Whether she likes it or not!
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KandehX
KandehX
Decent story, perhaps lengthen it and fix the spelling!