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mcholdrguy Member Since October 19, 2009
Neighbors Ch. 01
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 5 + The story was sexy and well developed and well.....does the topic "wordwall" mean anything to the author?

With all of the really good reviews that accompany many of the 'wordwall' stories one would think that the message would get through......PARAGRAPHS
Sissy's Little Secret
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 0 + Great story! Nicely spaced and easy to read. Even with one hand!! ;-)

It was real enough that I could imagine it happening. 'Normal kids with normal endowments doing believable things.

I am a panty guy so I loved the tease with the gooey panties and
Sissy's Little Secret
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 10 + I was confused by the color of the stars.....should have gone by the numbers......story was definitely a 5!!! Hope my screw-up dosen't ruin your score. Sorry
Slumber party 1
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 1 + Impossible to read or decypher
Ellie Marks of Manitoba
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 0 + Probably closer to 'real life' than a lot of the other 'first times' we read about. The characters were unusually eolquent but that added to the eroticism.
Teacher's Pet
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 10 + What a nice job of describing a very erotic situation. You have a gift!
Throwaway Child: A Love Story
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 10 + Almost real!! Good job.
Making Out With Mom
mcholdrguy 5652 days ago
- 10 + More, MORE!!!!!