mamlvr
Member Since October 19, 2009
Daddy's surprise
When are you going to learn? I need paragraphs. At least have some visual breaks.
Daddy's surprise
How many fucking times do we need to tell someone to use paragraphs? With no breaks in the story, it is difficult to read. I don't read stories that don't have breaks.
gangbaned at the nude beach
Paragraphs
This is unreadable
This is unreadable
loving family
Damn haven't you heard of paragraphs? Too difficult to read with no breaks. Edit it and I'll read it.
Gynecologist
fucking paragraphs or some kind of breaks between parts
too difficult to read
too difficult to read
Bill Gets to Know His Tenants
uh, yes When can I have this same experience?
Great story.
Great story.
Thanksgiving Surprise
Yes, more like this would be welcome.
Mother/Daughter Sexfight!
Paragraphs!
I didn't read it.
It needs to have visual breaks.
I didn't read it.
It needs to have visual breaks.
My brother Erik part 4
paragraphs you idiot
too difficult to read
too difficult to read
My Wife and the Lesbians Next Door: Part II
I'm not very , uh, er, I mean, well. What I meant to say is, "Well done my good man, well done."
How i got fucked by my mom and sister
paragraphs please
Lisa Moves In
Paragraphs!!!
I don't read stories that aren't in readable sections.
I don't read stories that aren't in readable sections.
2 Moms, 2 Sons, 1 Hot Night--- Part I
YES! Well done. I have aunts who I would like to see naked, but they are from strict Iowa country families. Wait a minute - that might mean they are even hornier.
Mom and her boys
Horrible - didn't read it. You need more breaks - paragraphs. Your story was too hard to read.
My Wife Loves Being A Gang Bang Whore
Lovely - I enjoyed the simple respectful way the gentlemen treated Sonja.
Oooops - wrong comment.
Maybe my wife will do this - after the sun explodes.
Oooops - wrong comment.
Maybe my wife will do this - after the sun explodes.
Little Sis and I Part 5
Difficult to read without breaks - paragraphs please.
My sister like to dress sexy
Almost unreadable. In fact, I didn't read it. You need breaks (i.e. paragraphs). I had a hard time even seeing sentences. Please don't post again until you can make it readable.
Hiking with my daughter
Why do you not know that it is difficult to read without paragraphs. Learn to write and then submit again.
My Sister and Me
WTF! Why do I need to write the same comment over and over? Paragraphs!
Vacatition with my daughter
WTF! Paragraphs. Have you tried to read any of your stories?
Fun With Little Brother
Waiting for the next story.
My daughters first sex ( i thought) page two
paragraphs!! it's difficult to read with no breaks
Sleeping Sis
paragraphs!! it's difficult to read without breaks
Daughter, Daughter, Mom and me
Paragraphs!!! It is difficult to read straight text with no breaks.
fucking my older sister
Paragraphs!!!
Your story is horrible to read because there are no breaks.
Your story is horrible to read because there are no breaks.
love her ass
Paragraphs!!!
Stories that are continuous without any breaks are hard to read.
Stories that are continuous without any breaks are hard to read.
love her ass
Paragraphs you idiot. Without them, it's hard to read.
Confessions in the family room
I don't read stories that aren't in paragraphs. They are too hard to follow.
Catching my wife with her mom and dad and her lil sister joins me
Uh, totally disgusting - do it again.
Too difficult to read without breaks.
I don't want to read it.