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mamlvr Member Since October 19, 2009
Helping out younger brother part 1
mamlvr 4813 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!!!

Too difficult to read without breaks.

I don't want to read it.
Daddy's surprise
mamlvr 4878 days ago
- 0 + When are you going to learn? I need paragraphs. At least have some visual breaks.
Daddy's surprise
mamlvr 4863 days ago
- 0 + How many fucking times do we need to tell someone to use paragraphs? With no breaks in the story, it is difficult to read. I don't read stories that don't have breaks.
gangbaned at the nude beach
mamlvr 4895 days ago
- -1 + Paragraphs

This is unreadable
loving family
mamlvr 4997 days ago
- 0 + Damn haven't you heard of paragraphs? Too difficult to read with no breaks. Edit it and I'll read it.
Gynecologist
mamlvr 4948 days ago
- 0 + fucking paragraphs or some kind of breaks between parts

too difficult to read
Bill Gets to Know His Tenants
mamlvr 5008 days ago
- 0 + uh, yes When can I have this same experience?

Great story.
Thanksgiving Surprise
mamlvr 5034 days ago
- 0 + Yes, more like this would be welcome.
Mother/Daughter Sexfight!
mamlvr 5050 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!

I didn't read it.

It needs to have visual breaks.
My brother Erik part 4
mamlvr 5082 days ago
- 0 + paragraphs you idiot

too difficult to read
My Wife and the Lesbians Next Door: Part II
mamlvr 5172 days ago
- 0 + I'm not very , uh, er, I mean, well. What I meant to say is, "Well done my good man, well done."
How i got fucked by my mom and sister
mamlvr 5176 days ago
- 1 + paragraphs please
Lisa Moves In
mamlvr 5192 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!!!

I don't read stories that aren't in readable sections.
2 Moms, 2 Sons, 1 Hot Night--- Part I
mamlvr 5263 days ago
- 1 + YES! Well done. I have aunts who I would like to see naked, but they are from strict Iowa country families. Wait a minute - that might mean they are even hornier.
Mom and her boys
mamlvr 5280 days ago
- 0 + Horrible - didn't read it. You need more breaks - paragraphs. Your story was too hard to read.
My Wife Loves Being A Gang Bang Whore
mamlvr 5280 days ago
- 0 + Lovely - I enjoyed the simple respectful way the gentlemen treated Sonja.

Oooops - wrong comment.

Maybe my wife will do this - after the sun explodes.
Little Sis and I Part 5
mamlvr 5328 days ago
- 0 + Difficult to read without breaks - paragraphs please.
My sister like to dress sexy
mamlvr 5336 days ago
- 0 + Almost unreadable. In fact, I didn't read it. You need breaks (i.e. paragraphs). I had a hard time even seeing sentences. Please don't post again until you can make it readable.
Hiking with my daughter
mamlvr 5336 days ago
- 0 + Why do you not know that it is difficult to read without paragraphs. Learn to write and then submit again.
My Sister and Me
mamlvr 5336 days ago
- 0 + WTF! Why do I need to write the same comment over and over? Paragraphs!
Vacatition with my daughter
mamlvr 5336 days ago
- 0 + WTF! Paragraphs. Have you tried to read any of your stories?
Fun With Little Brother
mamlvr 5335 days ago
- 0 + Waiting for the next story.
My daughters first sex ( i thought) page two
mamlvr 5344 days ago
- 0 + paragraphs!! it's difficult to read with no breaks
Sleeping Sis
mamlvr 5344 days ago
- 0 + paragraphs!! it's difficult to read without breaks
Daughter, Daughter, Mom and me
mamlvr 5348 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!!! It is difficult to read straight text with no breaks.
fucking my older sister
mamlvr 5351 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!!!

Your story is horrible to read because there are no breaks.
love her ass
mamlvr 5351 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs!!!

Stories that are continuous without any breaks are hard to read.
love her ass
mamlvr 5230 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs you idiot. Without them, it's hard to read.
Confessions in the family room
mamlvr 5426 days ago
- 0 + I don't read stories that aren't in paragraphs. They are too hard to follow.
Catching my wife with her mom and dad and her lil sister joins me
mamlvr 5034 days ago
- 0 + Uh, totally disgusting - do it again.