kcid56
Member Since October 19, 2009
"No More Tears"
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yarnspin
5070 days ago
kcid56
5542 days ago
yarnspin
5070 days ago
kcid56
5542 days ago
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That was quite a tease of a story. Nicely done I might add. It's good that you allowed the readers imagination to take over and think about what might have been. Good Job
"No More Tears"
by
yarnspin
yarnspin
It's nice that there was no banging and forcing and making her do this and that. You left the story so the readers imagination could take over. Nicely done
The Cum Muffin Game
by
Hotjane0808
Hotjane0808
Maybe, just maybe, had you broken it up into paragraphs instead of one long run-on, it may have been better, but I tend to doubt it.
The story itself was not believable.
The story itself was not believable.
best mate fucked
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tomqaz1
tomqaz1
No punctuation, no paragraphs, spelling is like that of a 6 year old.
You are not gay but want him to fuck you in the ass?
Your story is bullshit and makes no sense at all.
You are not gay but want him to fuck you in the ass?
Your story is bullshit and makes no sense at all.
Previews
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TomDidy
TomDidy
Short, and to the point, very descriptive, without going overboard. You left me wanting to meet your sister..... or maybe just hearing about the two of you some more. Keep writing, it's good stuff.
Teen Girls 1st Time
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Wormmel
Wormmel
It's amazing how men can write about women, and women can write about men. The attention to detail was quite good. Keep going.
The story of my first time(s)
by
editor
editor
Is this your first time(s) or have you been fucking 3 boys? Have you and Sue been fucking your boyfriend and if so, how can this be your first time(s) Your story starts off making no sense. You have no breaks in your thoughts, no paragraphs and horren
my baby First time
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FarrellB
FarrellB
First, it was difficult to read, your grammar and spelling were a huge distraction. The story line was not well written. Keep trying though, it's a start.
THE FIRST ONE (MOSTLY TRUE)
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luckmfucker
luckmfucker
This had the potential to be a great story, I found myself getting a hard-on a few times, but the spelling and grammar took the fun out of the story. Don't use street or 'gansta' terms, it makes the story sound immature and more angry then this one neede
FINALLY!!! I HAD MY COUSIN FOR BREAKFAST
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traits_tres
traits_tres
I found it very hard to read this, I could not even finish it,
More Than A Babysitter
by
Tremor
Tremor
It's great when things like this happen. Not with my wife, but with an ex that turned out to be bi. She didn't realize until that night.
Let us know how the night and life progress.
Let us know how the night and life progress.
The 5 Freshman Girls
by
othername37@yahoo.com
othername37@yahoo.com
I had a similar experience, but my number wasn't 5, it was only 2. I will never forget it.
Olivia's White Panties
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Reddy
Reddy
You sir, are a gentleman. Your story was well written and without knowing it, I got a little wet myself.
House of Incest
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Alexxx1
Alexxx1
It was a little short, but not bad. I do look forward to bringing your sister into it, but be more descriptive.
Stripped Fingered and Fucked
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Anthony Dennis
Anthony Dennis
So, when can we expect the next part?
By the way, I would LOVE to fuck your sister... thanks for the storie
By the way, I would LOVE to fuck your sister... thanks for the storie
Our New Life
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sExCrAzIe24
sExCrAzIe24
I hope there is more to come.
A few minor errors, but overall, a good start.
A few minor errors, but overall, a good start.
Friday night and I have to babysit - Part 2
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Kellyy
Kellyy
You did a great job in the first story, and the second, well, it was just as good. I felt a little rushed though. As Dario said, a little more on your body. I love that you offered him your virgin ass, but I would like to find out where that takes you
my little izzy 2
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perv4lilgrls
perv4lilgrls
I am not a fan of forced sex, but surprisingly enough, it got a rise. I'm glad you didn't delve into oral, her resistance kept the story line real.
Write more.
Write more.
What we did, was it normal?
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kcid56
kcid56
Sometimes it's just curiosity a little imagination, but I will submit more soon