jayloves69a
Member Since October 19, 2009
Me & Kelsey
no build up or climax bad story!!!
Eleanor's descent chptr 03
very good keep it up
When Kin have to move in with Kin
Looks like alot of work went into it, story line isn't the best and you swear way to much in a story kinda puts you off reading IMO.
Brother & Sister: Part 2
great story hoping for the next :)
Brother & Sister: Part 2
lol they shud make the darker colour the real star ffs
My Turn (Pt. 1)
Great story hope to see the next installment, but yeah drew is right it needs more realism but great story non the less
Fun in the family
more please awesome story
My friends bro and his gf
its ok needs to be longer though
I'm in control
Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)
I'm in control
Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)
Just 1 Crazy night ill remember
My grammer is good and so is by spelling mate, and i am writing another chapter billyleeblack and that'll have ur erotica in it lol
"I am a 43 year-old constructor. Clever, handsome, rich" anyway good story hoping for more :p