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ivan38 Member Since October 19, 2009
Neon
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 0 + Well done!
Neighbor's Wife, The
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 10 + Beautiful. Let's have more!
Finding Neverland
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 10 + Well I never! Who'd have thought.....
Three little words, but not the ones you think
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 10 + Beautifully imagined and written: and this is your FIRST story?
Brother visits Sister at College Part 7
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 8 + I think you may have run out of steam, after what was a truly brilliant series
Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 4 + My guess is that section 8 is less your style, which is more discursive than Peter_Pan. He tends to be more grittily descriptive. Regards, Ivan66
Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 9 + My rating came out as a "2" not as a "4" as I had intended. Regards,

Ivan66
The Dirtier, The Better
ivan38 5542 days ago
- 10 + Whole sentences! Paragraphs, even! How rare this is!

Well done.