ivan38
Member Since October 19, 2009
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JuniorV
5071 days ago
ivan38
5542 days ago
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Well done!
Neighbor's Wife, The
Beautiful. Let's have more!
Finding Neverland
Well I never! Who'd have thought.....
Three little words, but not the ones you think
Beautifully imagined and written: and this is your FIRST story?
Brother visits Sister at College Part 7
I think you may have run out of steam, after what was a truly brilliant series
Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party
My guess is that section 8 is less your style, which is more discursive than Peter_Pan. He tends to be more grittily descriptive. Regards, Ivan66
Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party
My rating came out as a "2" not as a "4" as I had intended. Regards,
Ivan66
Ivan66
The Dirtier, The Better
Whole sentences! Paragraphs, even! How rare this is!
Well done.
Well done.