ilovehorsesex145
Member Since February 26, 2010
Young mans breeding.
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doghumper
4674 days ago
ilovehorsesex145
4665 days ago
doghumper
4674 days ago
ilovehorsesex145
4665 days ago
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Ok, that was just bad. I have never seen such a lack of detail and honestly, the guy just got raped, WHY THE HELL WOULD HE COME BACK!!!!!!????? I'm sorry but if I could give this story a score from 1 to 10 I would give it a -10. You sir, should really consider giving up writing stories.
The Raid on Kadhir Pets
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bluebeard
bluebeard
Ok, one thing I have to say is TOO MUCH DAMN DETAIL!!!!! I love detail in a story, but this was overkill. If you had as many words, but a whole lot more was going on that would be one thing, but you were putting the detail that's meant for 10 things into one little thing. Even when it got to the sex. I thought there were only a couple ways to say someone was getting fucked, but you came up with 100. I'm sorry, but I lost interest really fast. People on here don't want to read an entire documentary they want to read a story.
How mom and I survived the cold without power.
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Splitter
Splitter
PLEASE GET THE NEXT ONE OUT SOON!!! That was really good.
Man on Viagra!!!
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darkelf69
darkelf69
That was incredible. Please get the next chapter out soon, I want to read it REALLY bad.
Hot Milf Best Big Tits DD
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milflovers
milflovers
Wow. That was terrible. You didn't have enough detail and you REALLY rushed the story. You went from ok there's this hot mom to we are making out.
Sailing the open seas with Em - PART 2
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emmygoody91
emmygoody91
Please keep going. I want to hear what happens next.
My Son The Inventor - Ch5 - Like an episode from the Simpsons
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writethis69
writethis69
Keep writing the story. It is amazing.